Concentration Year

Category

Item

Commentary

9

NC DPI

6.01 Demonstrate an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression that:

  • uses varying sentence types (e.g., simple, compound, complex, compound-complex) purposefully, correctly, and for specific effect.
  • selects verb tense to show an appropriate sense of time.
  • applies parts of speech to clarify and edit language.
  • addresses clarity and style through such strategies as parallelism; appropriate coordination and subordination; variety and details; appropriate and exact words; and conciseness.
  • analyzes the place and role of dialects and standard/nonstandard English.
  • uses vocabulary strategies such as roots and affixes, word maps, and context clues to discern the meanings of words.

6.02 Discern and correct errors in spoken and written English by:

  • avoiding fragments, run-ons, and comma splices.
  • selecting correct subject-verb agreement, consistent verb tense, and appropriate verbs.
  • using and placing modifiers correctly.
  • editing for spelling and mechanics (punctuation and capitalization).

 

9

RCHS

Parts of Speech

See Hacker 405, 412, 416

9

RCHS

Sentence boundaries

See Hacker 204 (definition of a sentence), 203, 209

9

RCHS

apostrophes

See Hacker 264

9

RCHS

semicolons

 See Hacker 259

9

RCHS

Subject-verb agreement

See Hacker 164

 

 

 

 

 

 

10

NC DPI

6.01 Demonstrate an understanding of conventional written and spoken expression by:

  • employing varying sentence structures (e.g., inversion, introductory phrases) and sentence types (e.g., simple, compound, complex, compound-complex).
  • analyzing authors’ choice of words, sentence structure, and use of language.
  • using word recognition strategies to understand vocabulary and exact word choice (Greek, Latin roots and affixes, analogies, idioms, denotation, connotation).
  • examining textual and classroom language for elements such as idioms, denotation, and connotation to apply effectively in own writing/speaking.
  • using correct form/format for essays, business letters, research papers, bibliographies.
  • using language effectively to create mood and tone.

6.02 Edit for:

·         subject-verb agreement, tense choice, pronoun usage, clear antecedents, correct case, and complete sentences.

·         appropriate and correct mechanics (commas, italics, underlining, semicolon, colon, apostrophe, quotation marks).

 

 

10

RCHS

Commas

  • Relative clauses
  • Introductory elements

a)       Adverb phrases/clauses

b)       Conjunctive adverbs

c)       Direct addressCoordinate adjectives

  • Unnecessary commas

a)       compound predicates

b)       between verb and subject

c)       concluding adverb phrases/clauses

d)       cumulative adjectives

 

See Hacker 244

10

RCHS

Quotations

  • Quotation punctuation
  • MLA parenthetical documentation
  • The quotation sandwich

See Hacker 267

 

 

 

10

RCHS

Pronouns

See Hacker 188

10

RCHS

Numbers

See Hacker 296

 

 

 

 

 

11

NC DPI

6.01 Demonstrate an understanding of the conventions of language by:

  • decoding vocabulary using knowledge of Anglo-Saxon, Greek, and Latin bases and affixes.
  • discerning the relationship of word meanings between pairs of words in analogies (synonyms/antonyms, connotation/denotation).
  • revising writing to enhance voice and style, sentence variety, subtlety of meaning, and tone in considerations of questions being addressed, purpose, audience, and genres.
  • contrasting use of language conventions of authors in different time periods of United States literature.
  • analyzing the power of standard usage over nonstandard usage in formal settings such a job interviews, academic environment, or public speaking events.

6.02 Discern and correct errors in speaking and writing at a level appropriate to eleventh grade by:

  • reviewing and refining purposeful use of varying sentence types with correct punctuation.
  • reviewing and refining correct pronoun usage, antecedents, and case.
  • refining subject/verb agreement and choice of tense.
  • extending effective use of phrases and clauses.
  • discussing parts of speech as they relate to writing.
  • editing for correct spelling and mechanics.

 

 

11

RCHS

Passive voice

See Hacker 144

11

RCHS

Active Verbs

See Hacker 142

11

RCHS

Parallelism

See Hacker 97

11

RCHS

Dashes

See Hacker 275

11

RCHS

Colons

See Hacker 262

11

RCHS

Parenthesis

See Hacker 277

 

 

 

 

 

12

NC DPI

6.01 Apply knowledge of literary terms, grammar, and rhetoric in order to write clearly, succinctly, and accurately by:

  • understanding how to use and apply grammatical, metaphorical, or rhetorical devices.
  • recognizing how to use different language conventions (such as loose or periodic sentences, effective use of passive voice, or the importance of strong verbs).
  • revising writing to enhance voice and style, sentence variety, subtlety of meaning, and tone in considerations of questions being addressed, purpose, audience, and genres.
  • contrasting use of language conventions of authors in different time periods of British literature.
  • analyzing the power of standard usage over nonstandard usage in formal settings such a job interviews, academic presentations, or public speaking events.

6.02 Discern and correct errors in speaking and writing by:

  • reviewing and refining purposeful use of various sentence types.
  • editing for correct punctuation, spelling, mechanics, and standard edited American English.
  • using appropriate transitional words and phrases.

 

 

12

RCHS

Precision

See Hacker 100, 113, 188, 153

12

RCHS

Modifier Placement

See Hacker 104

12

RCHS

Wordiness

See Hacker 139

12

RCHS

Coordination and Subordination

See Hacker 116

12

RCHS

Sentence variety

See Hacker 120