Practice AP Prompt for

Rising Seniors

 

Read carefully the following excerpt from Life of Pi, in which the narrator, Piscine Patel, meditates on what it is like to be lost at sea. Then write a well-organized essay in which you discuss the way author Yann Martel uses literary devices to help the reader understand Pi’s experience. Consider such elements as diction, syntax, imagery, and other devices in crafting your answer.

 

 


 

 

     To be a castaway is to be a point perpetually at the centre of a circle.

 

However much things may appear to change—the sea may shift from

 

whisper to rage, the sky might go from fresh blue to blinding white to

 

darkest black—the geometry never changes. Your gaze is always a radius.

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The circumference is ever great. In fact, the circles multiply. To be a

 

castaway is to be caught in a harrowing ballet of circles. You are at the

 

centre of one circle, while above you two opposing circles spin about. The

 

sun distresses you like a crowd, a noisy, invasive crowd that makes you

 

cup your ears, that makes you close your eyes, that makes you want to

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hide. The moon distresses you by silently reminding you of your solitude;

 

you open your eyes wide to escape your loneliness. When you look up,

 

you sometimes wonder if at the centre of a solar storm, if in the middle of

 

the Sea of Tranquillity, there isn't another one like you also looking up,

 

also trapped by geometry, also struggling with fear, rage, madness,

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hopelessness, apathy.

 

    Otherwise, to be a castaway is to be caught up in grim and exhausting

 

opposites.  When it is light, the openness of the sea is blinding and

 

frightening. When it is dark, the darkness is claustrophobic. When it is

 

day, you are hot and wish to be cool and dream of ice cream and pour sea

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water on yourself. When it is night, you are cold and wish to be warm and

 

dream of hot curries and wrap yourself in blankets. When it is hot, you are

 

parched and wish to be wet. When it rains, you are nearly drowned and

 

wish to be dry. When there is food, there is too much of it and you must

 

feast. When there is none, there is truly none and you starve. When the sea

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is flat and motionless, you wish it would stir. When it rises up and the

 

circle that imprisons you is broken by hills of water, you suffer that

 

peculiarity of the high seas, suffocation in open spaces, and you wish the

 

sea would be flat again. The opposites often take place at the same

 

moment, so that when the sun is scorching you till you are stricken

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down, you are also aware that it is drying the strips of fish and meat that

 

are hanging from your lines and that it is a blessing for your solar stills.

 

Conversely, when a rain squall is replenishing your fresh-water supplies,

 

you also know that the humidity will affect your cured provisions and that

 

some will probably go bad, turning pasty and green. When rough weather

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abates, and it becomes clear that you have survived the sky's attack and

 

the sea's treachery, your jubilation is tempered by the rage that so much

 

fresh water should fall directly into the sea and by the worry that it is the

 

last rain you will ever see, that you will die of thirst before the next drops

 

fall

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    The worst pair of opposites is boredom and terror. Sometimes your life is

 

a pendulum swing from one to the other. The sea is without a wrinkle.

 

There is not a whisper of wind. The hours last forever. You are so bored

 

you sink into a state of apathy close to a coma. Then the sea becomes

 

rough and your emotions are whipped into a frenzy. Yet even these two

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opposites do not remain distinct. In your boredom there are elements of

 

terror: you break down into tears; you are filled with dread; you scream;

 

you deliberately hurt yourself. And in the grip of terror— the worst

 

storm—you yet feel boredom, a deep weariness with it all.

 

    Only death consistently excites your emotions, whether contemplating it

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when life is safe and stale, or fleeing it when life is threatened and precious.

 

    Life on a lifeboat isn't much of a life. It is like an end game in chess, a

 

game with few pieces. The elements couldn't be more simple, nor the

 

stakes higher. Physically it is extraordinarily arduous, and morally it is

 

killing. You must make adjustments if you want to survive. Much

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becomes expendable. You get your happiness where you can. You reach a

 

point where you're at the bottom of hell, yet you have your arms crossed

 

and a smile on your face, and you feel you're the luckiest person on earth.

 

Why? Because at your feet you have a tiny dead fish.