Practice AP Prompt for
Rising Seniors
Read carefully the following
excerpt from Life of Pi, in which the narrator, Piscine Patel, meditates
on what it is like to be lost at sea. Then write a well-organized essay in
which you discuss the way author Yann Martel uses
literary devices to help the reader understand Pi’s experience. Consider such
elements as diction, syntax, imagery, and other devices in crafting your
answer.
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To be a
castaway is to be a point perpetually at the centre of a circle. |
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However much things may appear to change—the sea may
shift from |
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whisper to rage, the sky might go from fresh blue to
blinding white to |
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darkest black—the geometry never changes. Your gaze is
always a radius. |
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The circumference is ever great. In fact, the
circles multiply. To be a |
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castaway is to be caught in a harrowing ballet of circles.
You are at the |
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centre of one circle, while above you two opposing circles
spin about. The |
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sun distresses you like a crowd, a noisy, invasive
crowd that makes you |
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cup your ears, that makes you close your eyes, that
makes you want to |
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hide. The moon distresses you by silently reminding you
of your solitude; |
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you open your eyes wide to escape your loneliness. When
you look up, |
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you sometimes wonder if at the centre of a solar
storm, if in the middle of |
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the Sea of Tranquillity,
there isn't another one like you also looking up, |
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also trapped by geometry, also struggling with fear,
rage, madness, |
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hopelessness, apathy |
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Otherwise,
to be a castaway is to be caught up in grim and exhausting |
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opposites. When it is
light, the openness of the sea is blinding and |
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frightening. When it is dark, the darkness is claustrophobic.
When it is |
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day, you are hot and wish to be cool and dream of
ice cream and pour sea |
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water on yourself. When it is night, you are cold and
wish to be warm and |
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dream of hot curries and wrap yourself in blankets. When
it is hot, you are |
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parched and wish to be wet. When it rains, you are nearly
drowned and |
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wish to be dry. When there is food, there is too much of
it and you must |
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feast. When there is none, there is truly none and you
starve. When the sea |
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is flat and motionless, you wish it would stir. When
it rises up and the |
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circle that imprisons you is broken by hills of water,
you suffer that |
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peculiarity of the high seas, suffocation in open
spaces, and you wish the |
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sea would be flat again. The opposites often take place
at the same |
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moment, so that when the sun is scorching you till
you are stricken |
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down, you are also aware that it is drying the strips of
fish
and meat that |
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are hanging from your lines and that it is a blessing
for your solar stills. |
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Conversely, when a rain squall is replenishing your
fresh-water supplies, |
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you also know that the humidity will affect your
cured provisions and that |
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some will probably go bad, turning pasty and green. When
rough weather |
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abates, and it becomes clear that you have survived
the sky's attack and |
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the sea's treachery, your jubilation is tempered by
the rage that so much |
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fresh water should fall directly into the sea and by
the worry that it is the |
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last rain you will ever see, that you will die of
thirst before the next drops |
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fall |
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The worst
pair of opposites is boredom and terror. Sometimes your life is |
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a pendulum swing from one to the other. The sea is
without a wrinkle. |
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There is not a whisper of wind. The hours last
forever. You are so bored |
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you sink into a state of apathy close to a coma. Then
the sea becomes |
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rough and your emotions are whipped into a frenzy. Yet
even these two |
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opposites do not remain distinct. In your boredom there are
elements of |
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terror: you break down into tears; you are filled
with dread; you scream; |
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you deliberately hurt yourself. And in the grip of
terror— the worst |
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storm—you yet feel boredom, a deep weariness with it all. |
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Only death
consistently excites your emotions, whether contemplating it |
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when life is safe and stale, or fleeing it when life is
threatened and precious. |
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Life on a
lifeboat isn't much of a life. It is like an end game in chess, a |
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game with few pieces. The elements couldn't be more
simple, nor the |
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stakes higher. Physically it is extraordinarily arduous,
and morally it is |
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killing. You must make adjustments if you want to survive.
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becomes expendable. You get your happiness where you can.
You reach a |
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point where you're at the bottom of hell, yet you
have your arms crossed |
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and a smile on your face, and you feel you're the
luckiest person on earth. |
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Why? Because at your feet you have a tiny dead fish.
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